Friday, July 9, 2010

War of MIND and HEART.....

It's the war of the heart and mind,
the thoughts of mind , pains of heart,
they are inexpressible
known to none...

It's screams are silent,
heared by none.
But still they cry for someone,
To hear , To care, To understand..

The mind armed with memories and thoughts,
The heart armed with feelings and pain...

The heart beats with a sound, announcing the begin of a battle...
The mind fiddles back in its own memories, back-forcing the feelings aroused...

To make itself strong,
Those memories speak,those feelings sense...

Those days,those times,those hours,
seconds spent thinking.
Hours lost remembering.
Days gone regretting...

Bringing back timless feelings of
love and Care, Jealous and Envy , Hate and Madness...
Its the war of mind and heart,
known to none, how it hurts...

The memories of mind and pains of heart.
Supressing each other
The memories of tears and feelings of love.
Fighting each other over and over...

The faults of love, created memories
they hurt now..
Days that were once injoyed,
now ,never wanting to be remembered...

Waiting, time to just pass bye..
memories giving time to feelings to die..
Its just a matter of time,
how the feelings of once love,
now converted into carlessness, wanting to be ignored....

The love that was once pronounced,
is now not wanting to be noticed...

The battle WELL-FOUGHT, leaving
"MEMORIES ALWAYS TO PREVAIL

(p.s - my first and last poem i guess.... don kno what made me write this....had written it really really really long time back...eventually had even forgotten about it.... thanx to a friend of my , who during shifting of my things came across this piece of paper and encouraged me to write it down in my blog...
now since its my first poem , i bet it would be having a hell lots of mistakes.... :) :)...nevermind, i will definitely learn from them ;)...
Gud nyt world )
MA AS SALAMA.....
*SAVE ENRGY*

6 comments:

Jon said...

I really can't judge a poem...

So y is this the last!!!

Bikram said...

Nopes you are wrong .. its excellent and i dont find any problems...

I can relate to this one so perfectly...

The love that was once pronounced,
is now not wanting to be noticed

Lovely two lines and the war between heart and mind.. mmm

truly said MEMORIES are left of what once WAS beautiful.. but as people say time to MOVE on .. and make some more berautiful memories :)

and keep writing dont STOP...

Mingled Minds said...

@ jon... lols..same here ..really bad at judging peoms i suppose tz the reason why its my last one...lolzz..
had written this particular one ages ago, and rite now don really think it is my area :)


@ bikramjit... thanx a lot friend... :) :) :).... glad tht u liked it.... :D :>

R. Ramesh said...

gr8 attempt yar..keep it up buddy...and take care..

IgHhuu! said...

Excellent poem Nadia. Guess u can pen down some more of them. U have good control over the words !

IgHhuu! said...

Excellent poem Nadia. Guess u can pen down some more of them. U have good control over the words !